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Rain (before editing)

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Water is falling, falling
Gently, washing, washing
Like a stream sloshing, sloshing
'round rocks and boulders and trees
And my feet are wading, wading
Through the watery breeze
Here is the same poem as the one I posted earlier, except before I edited it. Let me know what you think!
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